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Brandon Starrk
Omega Innovation
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Posted - 2012.08.21 11:00:00 -
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@Mizhir
Quite good, only seems a bit mournful and forlorn (expression and face angle).
8/10 |
Brandon Starrk
Omega Innovation
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Posted - 2012.08.21 15:44:00 -
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Altrue wrote:
@Brandon Starrk :
Good background, original pose and face. I won't say that it is too dark, but you could use a better lighting on the eyes in my opinion. I understand what you tried to do but I have big troubles distinguishing them.
Also, but that's your personal part, I'm not sure about what you tried to make : the avatar is physically 'clean' while his expression shows something darker. That's a good idea, but I think you're relying too much on the lighting for the second part.
That's my opinion :)
8/10
You are entirely correct. My intention was to create a character that would look entirely benign and use the lighting to create the notion that there is a non-tangible sinister, dark side to it. I am aware of the problem with the eyes. Although I made them open grey, so as to be easily discernible in the dark, I have not yet found a way of exposure to the light that would allow the shadows to work as intended while making the eyes show.
@ Shalua Rui:
Pretty avatar, but I think it could do with another hairstyle and maybe an eyeshadow that matches the eyes' color. Also the chin piercing looks out of place. 7/10 |
Brandon Starrk
Omega Innovation
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Posted - 2012.08.28 17:34:00 -
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@Ivy
Like the background, the pose and the eyes. Not sure about the shirt and the hair. Lighting, neutral.
7/10 |
Brandon Starrk
Omega Innovation
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Posted - 2013.01.19 11:53:00 -
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Concrete look, 9/10 |
Brandon Starrk
Omega Innovation
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Posted - 2013.02.01 18:50:00 -
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@Ivy
Good pose, good background, though I'd say it does not complement the hair color much, good eye direction. The rest, I am not a fan. 7.5/10 |
Brandon Starrk
Omega Innovation
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Posted - 2014.02.25 20:12:00 -
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@Commissar Kate
I'd say quite cool, nice eyes there. Would like it a bit off-centered, 9/10 |
Brandon Starrk
Omega Innovation
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Posted - 2014.02.27 18:18:00 -
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@Bagrat Skalski:
A 9/10 from me sir, excellent portrait. Point taken off for that tattoo. Looks off place... Maybe change it or try the other side? |
Brandon Starrk
Omega Innovation
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Posted - 2014.02.27 18:36:00 -
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Mizhir wrote:@Brandon
Good avatar, but nothing that really stands out. You need to work alot on the details IMO.
6/10
That was the point.. Your's is quite good. I'd give it a 8/10, looks a wee bit crosseyed. |
Brandon Starrk
Omega Innovation
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Posted - 2015.10.30 20:03:48 -
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@Mina: Nice job. Beautiful, determined face. Love the short hair and the head tilt. -1 for being too much in the center (the glance drives the viewer's eye outside the frame): 9/10 |
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